Friday, October 22, 2010
Writing and Research 3
I do not think I have too many changes to make to the first draft of my paper. I believe I understood the concept and applied it to my paper, as well as understanding what to take away from the blog. The only real issue I had was wording my thesis and integrating it clearly into my paper. I have figured out the wording for my thesis, but because the first and second paragraph tie in with each other I need to work on putting in my thesis without disrupting the paragraph.
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Well I think if you can come up with a thesis as concise as that post, you'll be in great shape!
ReplyDeleteYou showed great confidence when you talked about your essay so i'm sure you are doing well. It's always better to have over confidence rather then under confidence, but try to tone it down a bit or you might make slight mistakes you can avoid.
ReplyDeleteWhat a confident you have on your paper! I wish I had those kind of confident and really looking forward to see your paper.
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