Aside from maybe taking to much influence from West's article I think I followed the prompt well. My thesis is not highly defined so hopefully it can be found and someone can help me expand it. I reached a writers block at the three and a 1/4 page point and would like some feedback on how to expand my ideas to efficiently use more space.
My paper may just be missing the long explanation most of the other papers will have of the blog they are following because mine is an easily looked up resource that is harder to explain from an inside perspective.
I thought your paper was well done. I like how you incorporated and used your own blog for this topic. It seems difficult to me too to add more to you paper from what you said in your last sentence. You could always write more things on your blog because after all it is your blog. I thought you did well overall.
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